Tyler, The last drawing has a lot of qualities you should be looking for - silhouette, weight shift, interaction, complementary poses - always look for these when choosing a pose. The Altair drawings are a little too hunched and crowded - you should take advantage of line weight variety to describe the forms a little better. I can see you're trying to refine contours but where the darker and thicker lines show up don't always look like the most appropriate places (overlap, weight shift, shadow side of form)
Cool : ) I really like the first page!
ReplyDeleteTyler,
ReplyDeleteThe last drawing has a lot of qualities you should be looking for - silhouette, weight shift, interaction, complementary poses - always look for these when choosing a pose. The Altair drawings are a little too hunched and crowded - you should take advantage of line weight variety to describe the forms a little better. I can see you're trying to refine contours but where the darker and thicker lines show up don't always look like the most appropriate places (overlap, weight shift, shadow side of form)